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Oh I get it! Dyslyxia, right. Whoa, now that I'm thinking straight, I believe this is an accomplishment. I still think you could brush up some of the phrases, though. ...

Okay, I think the reason why people aren't commenting on this is that: 1) We see that there's a hidden message. Personally, I don't get it. 2) the poem on ...

Hush. Your wishes aren't true. Dry tongue, you lie so fearlessly to the stars so close to bursting, whispering prayers over pennies. But you've drifted from the primrose path to ...

I invented swordplay. --Captain Aloisio I learned from the world's best, I am now the world's best, and I teach the students who will one day try to better me. ...

As I stumble onto the stage My shadow walks beside me, without complaint This beginning was weak. I think the "without complaint" was the dull tag-on here. Silent slender feet ...

(I just have to keep trying to write) a million lighted pin-pricks on this fortress's bloody facade, blaring a thousand tongues of tarot cards and candy stings that line the ...

(Just take the cookie) We're a friendly bunch, I'm sure. Hope to see you in the literary forums sometime soon.

"he" "her" "he" "her". This is all very unclear. And I think you could fix the linebreaks a lot, to make it all more coherent and less...awkward. I'm sure there ...

Right. Let's say we start to produce square, bronze coins and distribute them throughout the nation. End of story. Doesn't do much for you, does it? No, I think there's ...

fingersnap, the crackle of fireworks sound gunshots in the icy air. a thousand electrical currents shift with your unspoken words, too heavy with rot, too light to sink into me. ...

in the back room of a locked ward of a Cut an "of" rice pudding on the floor Why rice pudding? In any case, it's all very beautiful. It took ...

Get your fingers off his fucking dick: Oh, it seems so simple to say when we’re drenched in sweat, stuck to benches and watching the club lights flicker us back ...

Silent. Perhaps in a coma? --Empri An enigma. I'm not particular to what type. --Slyth Female would be nice. --Emperor Are you interested in romantic relationships?

*clears throat loudly* I'm a fan, Snoink, but this is awkward. You have to avoid such simple, almost childlike words when talking about such a rough and ...erm?...high-class character. Please, ...

my back, poorly stitched evidence of last night's explosion. Something is stitched after it falls apart or is beaten twice over or something, not from a big freaking BOOM! So ...